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This week, we are still basing our work off of the video, Ruin. 

You will be writing a diary entry about a day you spent in the city. You can follow the narrative of the character in the video or you can come up with your own idea/adventure.


RUIN - An animated short set in a post-apocalyptic universe. It's only a tiny sliver of a much larger story. Thankfully, it's now set up at 20th Century Fox to become a full length feature. Check out our new Facebook Fan Page at

Year 6 Writing - Monday 1st March - To identify features

Miss Hartley talks about the features of a diary entry. Afterwards, you need to choose a diary entry from the ones below and identify the features in there.

Year 6 Writing - Tuesday 2nd March - To write a diary entry

Using your work from yesterday and also the word we did on description last week, you should write a diary entry about your day in the ruinous city.

Year 6 Writing - Wednesday 3rd March - To edit, improve and publish.

Use your teacher's feedback to edit and improve your work. After, publish your work on tea stained paper for the extra, ruinous effect.